Originally posted to Facebook on July 17th, 2013. Normally the next entry would be a story challenge, but as previously mentioned I messed up the numbering, so this was Thing 29. Regardless, I'm very happy with how this one turned out.
Preamble:
"Is it just me, or are these getting more complicated? Anyway, on to the story...
Note: According to my calculations (http://www.ambrsoft.com/CalcPhysics/acceleration/acceleration.htm),
it would take about 4.95 seconds to reach the ground from the fortieth
storey, with about 2.24 seconds of that time spanning the 28th floor and
below. 2 seconds isn't a lot of time for regret."
Thing 30: A man jumps from the fortieth storey of a building. As he passes the 28th floor, he hears a phone ring and regrets that he jumped. Why?
A shiver ran
down Marlon's spine as he gazed over the edge of the building. It was as
high as he'd ever been, and the coldness of the air was shocking.
"How fitting," he thought, "that this cold is the last thing I'll feel."
He took a moment to let the sensation fully wash over him. He felt
every follicle of hair raise as goosebumps appeared on his flesh; felt
the tingling chill swimming through his blood. It was a frigid reality
that he wanted to clearly remember as he met his end. It was a harsh
reminder that the world was a cold, unfeeling place, and the numbness of
his extremities was beginning to match that of his soul.
He
took his phone from his pocket and let his steely gaze rest upon its
screen. The device was as calm as he was. There were no calls, no
messages, no notifications. It had a certain cathartic finality to it,
reinforcing his belief that he was all alone.
He felt the slightest pang of pain stab his heart as he was reminded that she was not with him.
Marlon's brow tightened to a grimace as he stepped onto the roof's lip.
His slow exhale filled the chill air with a soft cloud, causing a mist
to obscure the screen of the phone still held before him. His thumb
moved slowly, deliberately across the screen, wiping the mist away.
He silently counted the seconds in his mind, his eyes never leaving the
screen. The phone sat quietly in his palm, having nothing to say
despite the burning in Marlon's empty lungs. Each second fueled its
growing smugness; its self-satisfied assertion that it was indifferent
to its owner's plight. His anger deepened as the count increased, and he
let it consume him. He focused his will onto the phone until his rage
burned more fiercely than his starved lungs.
When he could take
it no longer, he released it all at once. Through gritted teeth frigid
air assaulted throat, the breath sending all of his senses into relieved
disarray. He used the sudden intake to fuel his courage, and soon he
was weightless, careening ever faster toward the unforgiving ground
below.
Now it was just him and gravity.
He saw the stark visage of the clock of fate in his mind, and allowed its hands to take a single step closer to midnight.
Here, at 11:56, he shed his guilt. In this infinite space he let those
he had wronged fade into obscurity. No longer would they haunt him. No
longer would he be held accountable. There would be no justice save for
that waged by fate itself.
Another step.
Here, at
11:57, he shed his happiness. Pleasant memories were meaningless here.
There was no joy in punishment, no hope. The light had faded from his
life a long time ago, and with the end so close it was only right that
his gladness be properly laid to rest.
Another step.
Here, at 11:58, he shed his regret. All he had done, and failed to do,
was tied to a past that no longer mattered. All that remained was the
inevitability of what was to come.
As the hand groaned toward the next notch, the unthinkable occurred.
His phone rang.
Here, at 11:59, the simple chime echoed throughout his skull. Her name
appeared on the screen, and the sight of it consumed what was left of
his tired mind. All that remained was the name, and the chime. Tears
were ripped from the corners of his eyes by the rushing air around him,
leaving cold trails of anguish in the space before him.
Never
again would he hear her voice, or see her smile, or feel comfort in her
presence. Never again would her eyes pierce his. Never again would her
warmth give meaning to his life.
His eyes closed as the clock struck midnight.
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